There is a haiku here somewhere, just know it

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mom I’m drawing a map
we go to around that twister
its on that map
all finished
oh wow wow wow
first we go round
over the bridge
road get bumpy
then you go thru
theres a little nut
its mikey’s party
its a twisty
i call it the planet
i draw a gate and a rock
the rock is inside the gate
im almost finished dad
i need more colors
im all finished
dad move your computer out of the way
round and around and around
lets play the orange cat

4 thoughts on “There is a haiku here somewhere, just know it”

  2. i call it the planet
    round and around and around
    i need more colors

    -not sure it makes sense (not even sure it has to), but I like the line “i need more colors” a lot.

    And then, of course, there’s the school of haiku that doesn’t even require a strict 5-7-5 format, which would really open up the possibilities 🙂

  3. Both these are great 🙂

    Richelle mentioned that I should include some of her favorite sayings, I’ll add those next. I wrote these down as she was drawing next to me working on the laptop.

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